Red White and Brusied 2010 Promo Discussion Thread...

[Cryonix]

Discuss and Review Promos here. Please, if you are reviewed, please leave a review.

[Death Approaches]

I just posted my promo, I think it was really fun to write. It may have made Anthony look a bit greedy but it was what I went for, I think it makes him more human-like, I'll review some promos later, I'd like thoughts on mine/tips on how to improve on mine too if you could... thanks

[Maddiemoiselle]

Could Jacob possibly get extensions for Jack and Gabby?

[Killswitch]

I'll grant it. If the other mods don't want to grant it we might need a discussion but as of now, he does have them.

[Cryonix]

It's fine, KS. Also having an extention is Michael Servin.

[G-Rich]

Matty B, you prove once again why you are BY FAR better than anyone who has ever participated in the FWA. I can only wish that in your final match I could've produced something comparable to what you wrote. Unfortunately... I am too drunk now to give a full review... but within the next few days I intend to explain my promo and review everyone elses. Let's make this PPV amazing.

[Engaged To Ouellet]

Thanks for that Drew and Chris.

Awesome promos from both Boudreau and G-Rich, very fitting for the FWA's finests last hoorah.

[™S. nay-rappeX taMmeT]

Matty B, you prove once again why you are BY FAR better than anyone who has ever participated in the FWA.

damn, Greg. other than thank you, i dont know what else to say.. has always meant a lot coming from you, buddy.

I can only wish that in your final match I could've produced something comparable to what you wrote.

lol, you DID. you certainly did. your promo was beyond amazing, imo. i dont want to say anything more here, as i am going to give a full review later on today.

but within the next few days I intend to explain my promo

i plan to do the same, actually. i have never "explained" a promo of mine; i always leave them open for whatever the reader wants to make of it. open for interpretation, and i will do the same here. ill explain it in a few days, after ppl have read it on their own, and came up with their own thoughts on it.


and as always, i will do review for review. and id really like it for this one, seeing as how it is my final piece with the boudreau character. thanks.

[King TE]

awesome promo tmx

[Rebel Benoit]

sorry for the no promos guys with PWS being Down the Other Day and My Mounting Personal Problems im in no Shape to Do a Promo Hope to Be Back for the next TV show if Needed you can announce my match as a forefit and give my opponent the Win.

That Rebel Bad Ass

[Wolf]

Old Yeller The last chapter of the journal really got me emotions flowing. Great opening. It shows that climax of The Matt Boudreau story is coming near. The later was a nice touch. The flashback interview with G Rich kinda stopped the whole whole flow of the end is coming. The flashback was out of place here, since we saw them in the build up. However, the next one from Porter duel was great.

I have STAYED ALIVE, to face off, one-on-one, with YOU…

We all though back then that you mean Darnell, but it brought us back to realise our mistake. You are explaining it greatlly later on. Showing that he was YOUR Idol. As it came to the transformation part. A great stuff revealing the backstage politics of G Rich. One bad thing is that I wanted to use that angle for my End of Summer Madness promos :shifty1: Since Wolf was held back despite beating Nemesis, but that is my story. It was served very well here. Better then I would have done. The birthday celebration was out of place aswell, since you went from the stronglly in character segment into out of character segment. The BD celebration should have taken place on last FN. If it did I apologize for not paying attention. Alexza pregnant is a great news. I bet the little guy is going to follow in Daddy's footsteps. I plan to debut Wolfs son in the far away future so we can have Wolf vs. Boudreau one on one Finally the Main Meal. Does in takes place in Guadeloupe or not? I am not sure with the jungle the place, where Boudreau will live his final days can be the one it all started it would make sense, since regret's nothing in his life. He has no issue with the place, which caused his downfall. The St. Helena of Emperor of promo cutting. I am glad you adressed Viva's Teacher vs. Student thingy, what you told was exactlly the way I see it. Boudreau made Boudreau. He respects G Rich, but he created himself. Oh, I never had the opportunity to laugh at G Rich for taping out to female I do remember, when G Rich requested to be called G Rich in promos. You arenot the only one, who never refered to G Rich as greg, neither did I. What I didn't like was the whole paragraph dedicated to everything you accomplished, then again it is amazing to see the length of the list. Great to show another of you prophetic parts. " It was your destiny to get injured, so i could move on to become the new Idol" The last paragraphs were as strong as intro. I end it here for now. It may have part two.

And the coding of the promo is Dashing!!!!

[Death Approaches]

Matt Boudreau: First off, a hell of a promo to go out with. The intro... one of the best I've ever seen, the last paragraph really makes you think, was this always planned as a whole to be at this exact date? There were some really cool facts there. The Roger card was really interesting, I remember that character from that promo, I also liked the who 'ACT II', Scene one was something I've never seen before done, it is a great concept, and scene III... wow... that was something that I liked here, it changed the whole view of what the Indellacy sometimes did to him, I must say that it has always impressed me how much you do go back in research, it's amazing how you do and this is the prime example of how much time you put into this, simply amazing. The last part was LONG, this was probably the longest I've ever seen or read even though I read 7000 word ones some weeks, but the thing was that it kept me entertained, it kept me reading, the last part was absolutely amazing, four years jammed there into that part, the way you ripped G-Rich appart was wonderful, it was face like yet still fully written with full emotion, this is how a conclusion should be like, its sad to see Boudreau go... a couple of months ago we said 'how could you top this?', we always do... we should already learn that you will, this will be a promo that I'll remember for years to come and that's what a promo should be about, AWE worthy... bravo TMX...

I'll review more later but was getting this out of the way first...

[JJ Smooth]

Couple of thoughts, 1st..LOVE New Zealand!! Ok..enough about me...Boudreau...G-Rich...drunk or whatever, the 2 of you, put on a display..that...well..for lack of a better term, just simply can't be topped. I'd even venture to say that combined, these 2 promos should be tacked, or however they do it here, so that in the future, every single person who visits this site can see what carefully thought out, well written, awesome promos truly look and more importantly, FEEL like. As a reader constantly captivated, I feel like I'm eating my last meal before death.

I'll review more as time permits, but...the 2 of you are in a class all your own. Congrats to you both...

[James Sync V2.0]

I apologize for not promoing, everybody. I got caught up in working things out with a indy promotion that wants to sign me. They wanted me to come out to the show last night and I ended up staying at the owners place with the roster.

[L.A.I.N.E.Y.]

I apologize for not promoing, everybody. I got caught up in working things out with a indy promotion that wants to sign me. They wanted me to come out to the show last night and I ended up staying at the owners place with the roster.

I'm sure they'd all give funny looks if you said you have to go home to 'promo'