Official Promo Discussion Mile High 2010 PPV

[iMatt]

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[The Golden One]

dorry for posting that in the promo thread, matt. long week.

[Engaged To Ouellet]

Chris Kennedy: Great promo Johnny as always I loved the pictures you used, the static filled TVs were a nice touch to really illustrate what's going on in the house and emphasises the eerie feeling of the setting. Using facebook was a very unique touch as well and really showed how well The Great Siege have gelled together while still putting down Rocky Creed, Duke Drazin and NNN and it lead into the main part of the promo; the blog. The K:TV section was very funny with Zaire impersonating him, a cowboy acting like a surfer is pure gold...though I don't think he said dude enough, though the blow up dolls are very fitting stand ins for his beach bunnies. The blog had the right sense of pompousness that goes hand in hand with Chris, classic heel moment with him calling a conspiracy against him. Even more so when he blasted Dallas...can defiantly see Chris getting booed out of the building for those comments come MH. Nice job of really undermining what NNN has done so far and attacking everything about him. I cant wait to see what TMX comes back with because this should be a great and very close match, possibly show stealer.

Oh and Gabby knows all large breasted attractive women and JLH =

[DramaShark]

Thanks ETE!! I really appreciate the feedback! I am about to read yours and give you some in return.

I'm not sure why the GIFs in my promo went dead but I am fixing that problem as we speak.

[Engaged To Ouellet]

Duke Drazin: Very unique promo Speedy, it kept me very interested from start to finish as I was looking forward to seeing where you were going with this alternate reality. I'm not going to lie having Gabby as an integral part of that reality stroked my ego quite well also and Apollo Balboa had me in stitches...with the line “I’ve seen diarrhoea less runny than his mouth” being my favourite of the promo and another chuckle worthy moment. As always it was classic Drazin, going after absolutely everybody and anybody not just his opponents but half the remaining roster as well. It was a very different and unexpected side of Duke Drazin with all the usual scathing humour laced tirades that make him one of the most interesting guys in the FWA. All of these insults were thoroughly entertaining from the names to dissecting each person under the guise of being a detective. Nice way to end it as well with the delusion falling and the real Drazin rearing his head for a few moments.

[DramaShark]

Gabby, it took me a while to read your promo but for as long as it was you kept the reader glued to every single word and when it was over, it didn't feel so long because it was so good that i wanted more! You are truly the one to beat, IMO, your linguistic skills coupled with the aesthetic atmosphere you continue to set up in yoour promos is a huge indicator as to why you are in the Main Event at Mile High. My favorite part was Gabrielle making it clear that she was NOT Jillian De Silva or Moira Crawford and her legacy isn't dictated by her breasts. Really amazing promo :applause:

Duke, as always you don't disappoint. Man you just shit on everyone and you do it so well. I couldn't help but laugh my ass off as you continued to call Creed Apollo Balboa. Allthough someone who didn't think it was so funny was THIS guy....


--Apollo--

[Engaged To Ouellet]

Cheers Johnny Im glad to hear that with the length that it still kept you very interested, Maddie said it kept her interested from start to finish but I wasn't sure if that was just her being a supportive wife or not.Thanks for the review and at the mention of Jillian I must applaud TMNT for not mentioning her as I was genuinly expecting her to be brought up in all the other Massacre promos.

[tmnt316]

Yeah I tried not to mention things about everyone that I've already went off on them on at length, thus the alternate reality..haha....figured you'd like her being the overall baddie...lol

Gabrielle - Your descriptions are pretty much the best in the FWA, if not the best. They always make your promo's stand out that much more and this one was no different. Plus you really lit into everyone good, beating up poor old Drazinas much as you could, it was like a promo in and off itself for each person..haha and weaved them all into one. Very good promo, enjoyed it. Defintely going to be a close match, if the others can keep up the pace..haha

Kennedy - nice spin on why you lost to Drazin and a really good promo that should give TMX a run for his money. Like the way you ripped up NNN and used the visuals of Facebook and such to get Kennedy's point across to. Hopefully all the promos are on par with the ones up so far.

[Venomous Dragon]

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[Engaged To Ouellet]

Anthony: Nice promo DA you've been doing a great job as TV Champ thus far and this promo was no different. Nice move setting it in Africa, that really ties the entire promo to Jibade and you used it to emphasise certain points of the match and the FWA in general. Anthony's interaction with the fan was enjoyable to read I quite like how he questions his fame, its a very different approach to the usual “I'm the greatest and everyone loves me”. The analogy of the Great Siege as a pack was good as well, as was Anthony ripping into Jibade nice to see the confidence being Champ has given him.

Xavier Xander Xerxes: I really like the XXX gimmick, his bloodline tracing back to the Persian Emperor really makes him stand out against everyone else. All the paintings and the richie rich lifestyle are very enjoyable to read and it paints him as a very larger than life figure. Really while the descriptions are short they do a great job of putting XXX over as does his style of speech. Everything emphasises how he's better than everyone else, great work mate.

[Maddiemoiselle]

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Jibade Jones: The TMZ bit was a unique way of setting up the promo and really helped to establish Jibade not being able to find this 'doctor'. A very unique 'makeover' as well once he did find the doctor, it kept me very intrigued though as I wanted to see where his methods were leading. Had to laugh though that despite the doctors best efforts Jibade remains Jibade, hateful and spiteful he cant be changed. Great job of putting Jibade over and really showing he is all the while tearing into Anthony at every opportunity. It should be a close match between you and DA, good luck.

Juan Lopez: A classic heel character you have here mate, angry, arrogant and feeling unappreciated and all pulled off really well. I really like how driven Juan comes across as, he's not willing to take the slight against him lining down, he despises his opponent for being in a tag team and is vowing to upstage the PPV that follows. I look forward to seeing more and more from you.

Nathan Neptune Nowland: Awesome work as always TMX, loved the opener with the Entourage getting their hair done and such. The movie started off perfectly with a Morgan Freeman esque voice over and only got better and better from there. I loved the interactions between the faux Great Siege and how you used them to really put Kennedy down, even bringing up some of his past promos to do so. NNN is as annoying as ever, I never knew the word 'dude' could be used so much but he's still thoroughly entertaining to read which is a credit to your writing. “Shmeedy Smeed pants” had me laughing hard, got to love the juvenileness of these 4. Just an awesome promo all round, the creativity, the insults, the constant 'dude' and 'dudettes', the movie especially was probably my favourite part of it, its yet another FWA movie alongside the O'Ryan/Cortez buddy cop movie that needs to be made.

[DramaShark]

Nathan Neptune Nowlands promo was legit. The part about Kerry Kennedy makes me want to make a Kerry Kennedy character on here to face NNN. lol

[10-Figures of Punk]

promo posted.... and to Chris Kennedy. NNN and XXX ... great promos

[Engaged To Ouellet]

Darnell Porter: Another great promo for the Massacre match. I really liked the pressure theme and how you used it to question whether anybody else could handle it, while building up Darnell really well with all his past accomplishments and reminding us how he can handle the pressure.

Bullseye Johnson: I really liked the fan fest to start things off and it set the tone for the promo with the fans all doubting Bullseye, making him want to prove himself even more. That determination carried itself over into the entire promo with Bullseye's anger coming to the forefront quite often, defiantly tore into all the other competitors. The therapist closing it out was a nice touch as well, addressing Bullseye past and furthering his desire to win the FWA Championship. Great work this is probably your best work Viva!

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Eyesnsane: I really liked this promo and the respectful side of Eyesnsane who wants to live up too and then surpass the examples set by some of the current and former Champions in FWA. Continuing that with his respect for Diehl while also questioning his reign as YL Champ. Nice use of pictures as well it really helps to further illustrate the setting and people. Great work we very well could be looking at a new YL Champion.

Joshua Diehl: Nice work Josh, I loved the dark humour of Diehl. It was enjoyable seeing him really tear into Eyesnsane whilst making a joke of him at the same time. The use and analogy of the alley way was really good as well, as was his preference of pride in himself over pride in the Championship. this defiantly should be a good match for the Young Lions Championship.

Ashley O'Ryan: Really enjoyable promo to read Jabber, had plenty of humour throughout it and took shots at allot of people. Should be interesting to see where Devin and Ash go from here now that its revealed it was all just staged.

[PT15]

Duke Drazin: The word play was excellent, the promo just like Gabrielle's kept me interested from beginning to end. Creativity was excellent, I couldn't even think of a concept like that let alone pull it off.

Gabrielle: Let me say I think this is the best Gabrielle promo which is saying something because all of them are very good. It is evident you did a lot of research about all the wrestlers involved. I do think Duze Drazin has the funniest remarks about opponents but this Gabrielle promo had me laughing with some of the stuff said, she went hard on everyone.