FWA 6th Anniversary Show Promo Discussion Thread

[Dr Nash]

Discuss Promos Here. Do Not Ask For A Review If You Are Willing To Give One Yourself

[Wolf]

Can I have your attention please, I have just red a great promo from Duke Drazin and I will not dissapoint. It brings out my competitive spirit. This match is going to be awesome.

[JJ Smooth]

Can I have your attention please, I have just red a great promo from Duke Drazin and I will not dissapoint. It brings out my competitive spirit. This match is going to be awesome.

No surprise, Wolf delivers. What a promo sir. Very gripping, almost gives Wolf the look of sedate and relaxed, but in the blink of an eye, he lets that anger and madness that make him the monster that he is, take over. Just a great, great promo.

[Wolf]

Ryan Rondo: Good stuff. You put over yourself, your opponent, the match. One problem:

Of course it is a dream matchup for any FWA Fan who enjoys the lower card divisions on both shows

Don't reffer to yourself as lower card it was the buzz killington after a great start. If i take that out then you made your job you hyped the match and made me want to see it. Other plus is the mention of guys like nARC, Turpentine it is annie show. You should get plus point like the mentioning of troops at tribute to the troops. I didn't thought about it. I will remmember it for next year :P


Juan Lopez:

Here on Crossfire I feel right at home with all the demons and monsters that roam the halls

Welcome to CF, fella

Good, classic stuff. I can see a ton of potentional in you. I am sure you will do great on Crossfire. All you need is a good storyline to mold your character to make him unique with something.

Cameron Cross: huge fan of your character. Cameron Cross is THE Underdog in FWA. You took that from Devin Golden himself. We know the result, but I can't wait for the match to see Rocky Balboa land a knockout punch. I may sign as writer for this

Drew Jolson: What a promo! it didn't felt long it went right to the point and you adressed everything that needed to be adressed. We are going to talk about this promo for years to come

Alexx: You are one color short in the promo

I’ve always wanted to be better and in the last year, I did it, I pushed myself further. I fought for it. I pushed through and I know that I’ve never been this good. Before I never stood a chance next to those big names: Stu St.Clair, or Thomas Princeton, and I couldn’t even imagine stand in the ring and be considered as one of those big ones; but I know now that I am a big one! I am one of those big names

Couldn't say it better myself

damn you DA you ruined my match with Dukester

[Wolf]

Here comes the life support of this thread


Will I love the character, the waldo metaphor came across greatly. Should Woof be parody of myself? I am flattered it was awesome. Great dialogue plus scene and few good puns receipt for awesome promo

Charon Meh two scenes. First scene had nothing to do with the second, so it could have been avoided, but the second part is a true gem atleast for me. Samurai theme is my thing

[Engaged To Ouellet]

Admittedly I Haven’t read every promo but the one that really caught my eye and my favourite of the show is Charons. Your writing is so enjoyable to read Josh, you really get the voice of the character flowing so well. With Charon there’s a meaning behind every sentence, every word, It’s crafted in a way as to portray a turbulent but at the same time educated mind. I liked the opening scene and the relationship between Charon and Josh, and seeing that joking side of Charon was a change of pace. You touched on Lauren, Michael, Gabby, Jack all the key players in Charon’s history, so many off relationships for one man. You touched on the theme to the second part of the promo here as well and it’s a theme that I really enjoyed. Despite what Charon is he’s out to stop the rise of the next Severino. The second setting is what really blew away with this promo. I enjoyed getting to delve into how Charons mind works, how he views what he does. The comparison to Jack was good and fitting under these circumstances and it’s not often that Jack could be called the lesser of two evils…

Just great work, I have my work cut out for me at Mile High.

And also a quick note Killemalls promo though a jobber one was good, I love the idea of playing the FWA videogame to scout your tag partner.

[Eyesnsane]

Wolf: That was great, the way you wrote that I literally can't find the words. I can honestly say reading that promo makes me look at how I write Eyesnsane in a whole new light, it was inspirational for me....Wow

Gabrielle: That was a nice regal moment... Thanks for your feedback on Killemall, with jobber stuff I really just have a little fun try to show parts of the characters personality you may not see often.

[Death Approaches]

I do my best to ruin dream matches by showing up Wolf

[Stratusphere]

Does anyone know what happen to everypost, or maybe am I the only who can't seet them?

[Stratusphere]

Does anyone know what happen to everypost, or maybe am I the only who can't seet them?

[iMatt]

Something went wrong with the forum, sorry guys for the delay but I'd take this time as a mini vacation until everything can get back in order, so you can get into the swing of school and such.

[Kellie]

Ok, database errors are gone, sorry for all the downtime everyone, the show can now be posted when you guys are ready

[Killswitch]

Thanks Kellie. It was nice to see that we didn't lose everything FWA. That would have sucked.

[iMatt]

Yes thank you Kellie! alright people break time is over let's get back to work and get this show up sometime this weekend!

[Maddiemoiselle]

Does anything else need to be written?