FWA Mile High PPV Promo Discussion Thread

[Dr Nash]

Discuss Promos Here. Don't Ask For A Review If You Are Willing To Not Give One Yourself.

[jabberwocky]

Stu's internet is down at the moment so everybody knows and is trying to get a hold of him.

[DramaShark]

Gabrielle- I loved this promo. You did a great job acknowledging your past with Charon and your past with Michael Servin who seems to have been a driving factor in the Gabrielle/Charon feud. This was a very well written promo from beginning to end and it was one hell of a way to put closure to a feud that has been going on for several months. Just awesome all around.

Duke Drazin- what an engaging promo this one was. I love Duke's perspective on Kennedy, and I love how he dismantles his his opponents so badly that I even take a sick delight in the stuff you said about Kennedy. The other half made me want to kick Duke in the buts. The appropriate reaction for a job well done. Great job tmnt. It was an honor facing you again.

Wolf- Whoa! That promo was a hallmark in creatinve writing, and it reminded my why I love the FWA. Wolf is such an awesome character, and this promo really showcased why he is as awesome as he is. When Wolf GOES ALL CAPS, you listen, goddamn it!
My favorite part was when he said "YOUR DESTRUCTION IS MY REASON FOR LIVING! I DON'T KNOW WHAT I'M GOING TO DO WITH MYSELF AFTER MILE HIGH! SH*T, PROBABLY THE SAME F*CKING THING BECAUSE FRANKLY, STUART, I CAN'T IMAGINE A WORLD IN WHICH I DON'T LIVE TO KICK THE LIVING SH*T OUT OF YOUR FACE!" I thought that was pretty intense. The structure and peresentation of your promos are always top notch, and this one was no different.

JoJI: Short but sweet. Could have been longer for the amount of opponents you have to face but what you do have sure packs a hell of a lot of punch. I do love how you called out Joey Bones and could definitely see a feud for between them down the line.

Anthony: Once again reminding everyone why you have made the TV title what it is. In my opinion you should be in the main event scene soon but that's just me. William Jayne VS Anthony is actually one of the matches I look most forward to and can't wait to see how this one plays out. I also commend you for acknowledging your previous loss to him and telling us whats changed this tis time around.

Stu St.Clair: You have to be the most talented linguist in the FWA. When Stu talks, he makes a hell of an impact. I love how you dissect each and every opponent, piss on their weaknesses and prove with merely words that you are the best. Based off of just you and Wolf, it is damn hard to decide who's was better and there are still a hell of a lot of promos left to be turned in. I happily await the day my character has a match with you because it would be an honor. Truly the top of your game, this may fetch you your 5th World Title as far as I am concerned.

[The Full Time Shakey]

Unfortunately, I cannot promo, i thought the deadline was tomorrow (i'm free on Tuesday thus have no coursework to complete) but as of right now I am still up, and cramming and doing work, so unfortunately, I cannot put anything in, apologies to FWA mods and my opponents.

[Minstrel of Chaos]

Unfortunately my power went out last night due to a thunderstorm while I was trying to post my Brawl promo. My apologies.

[Mr.E]

I have been absolutely swamped with class work. I tried to make time to promo but I am in the middle of mid term examination which do not end until tuesday. Once again I'm very sorry for the no show

[DramaShark]

If anyone had an extension don't they have until Midnight tonight?

[JJ Smooth]

I thought it was a 12-hour extension? Or not...but I'll be putting up reviews later this evening.

[DramaShark]

no it's a 24 hour extension, and I figured if we had until Sunday at Midnight then a 24 hour gives you until Monday by Midnight, I thought, but I may be wrong.

[JJ Smooth]

If it's a 24 hour one, then yeah, got till Midnight Pac Time...3AM in the East...or 8pm Tues NZL Time

[Wolf]

hmmm... it is pretty even between me and Stu I wonder, what's gonna make the difference or if someone takes it from under our nosses and notice the little pun in the opening

Double C- the biggest mistake you made was that you concentrated on future shot instead of current shot free for all brawl whatever promo is much better then the NA title one. As for NA title you should had big ass headline The more things Change the more they remain the same. There was a good backstory, but it needs to be highlighted more. If you gave more time to this one you could have won. Your promo is diamond in the rough while the Alexx one is just a diamond.

As Drazin heard through the grapevine you want a tag ass wiper title shot. Well bring Stewie your oh so scary brother, bring Doink the Clown, bring whoever you want. Drazin and Tag Along Anthony aren’t like APAB, we’ll take you on anytime, anywhere.”

I got myself a tag title shot unfortunatelly noone wants to be my tag parter, they think that i bite

the irony here is that up till now everyone was cashing the briefcase on Boudry, Idol is gone and now it is Drazin. Drazin says that Kennedy is foolish


Mrrrrr. Kennedy... Kennedy- It is hard to believe that it has been a year since you joined FWA. I loved your work with this promo. Great snake story too btw. New Main Eventer was born here tonight top notch quality, sir

So you can take your shiny old chrome dome, take your $3.00 flea market contact lenses, your goatee that came right out the year 1995, your happy hookers and your Joe The Cameramen

this is how you end a promo. Astonishing! Astonishing! Astonishing!

[DramaShark]

thanks, Wolf

Man, between Wolf, Stu, Princeton and Porter everyone really gave it 100% and this is seriousley going to be a close one!

My 2nd wave of reviews:
Juan Lopez- Well, Razor and Tripper no-showed so it's safe to say we have a brand new X-Division champion. But even if any of them had promo'd they would still have a tall order ahead of them because, man you KILLED it. This promo was great. You are really getting better with each and every post. My only bit of criticism is that the dark blue text is a little hard to read on our dark grey forum skin. Maybe go a shad lighter. And also could have been a bit longer but man you did pack a punch with what little bit you said. "Tonight I won't be denied. Tonight is the beginning of my legacy on Crossfire. The makings of a true monster." Great line, and it makes me excited for what's next from Lopez

XXX- Your promo had a very strong foundation but you failed to actually promo against your opponents in the Brawl. You didn't mention a single one of your opponents, you mentioned Golden a lot but he's not in the match. You mentioned Rondo briefly in passing but ignored everyone else, and you didn't even mention the match you were i at Mile High until the last sentence of your promo. Like I said, strong start but I flt maybe more could have been done, considering you had so many opponents there was plenty of ammo for you to use that you didn't.

Cameron Cross (NA Title)- Wow. Just wow. This was a world title caliber promo. Everything from the presentation to the execution was flawless. I wouldn't be suprised if this gets you the North American title win. Excellent job.

Cameron Cross (brawl for it all)- Like Wolf, I am am scratching my head over why you would put so much effort into a midcard title #1 contenders match when you already have North American title shot. That being said, you totally killed it here. You broke down and dissected all of your opponents viciously, the pacing of the promo was appropriate and the dialogue was well written. Cameron wants to go all the way at Mile High and that is awesome. I hadn't read your promo until after I posted my Joey Bones one and was amused at how similar they are in presentation. With an opponent like you, I hope I can win this one lol.

William Jayne (TV Title)- You are one of the best people around here at writing back and forth dialogue. The interview with Jayne really gave us a solid insight into who he is. The actual meat of your promo was a little light, thought you could have done more at the end but this was nicely written overall.

Charon- such a spooky promo from such a cerebral character. Charon is great at getting inside his opponents heads, and I took a sheer delight in reading this one. The bits with Servin only added to it all, as he has been the centerpiece in this angle. Bravo!

Alexx- another terrific promo from a terrific North American champion. Gotta say you absolutely shut it down. Your promo and Cameron's promo were so damn awesome and equally matched that this one should be rather tough to call. I liked the line "In the past year, I’ve changed so badly and I’ve endure so much that I can’t let it go. I want to prove to the entire world that I am way more than a pretty face… And thank you to Stu, they might stop for a while" really gives us a look in the direction Alexx is heading in. Great job!

Porter- This is classic Darnell Porter. Just when I thought it was between Stu and Wolf, you drop an H-Bomb of a promo. I liked how in the beginning you touched on the past, but as the promo progressed you made it about your future. Outstanding.

O'Ryan- Like XXX, you didn't really say much about your opponents, you more or less just talked about yourslef. This was an entertaining promo nonetheless, it just seemed to have been a bit lacking in certain areas.

Princeton- Remember when I said you were the wild card in this? You just showed everybody why. Good god man, you really ripped into everybody. You have history with almost everyone in this match and you sure as hell used that to your advantage, you had a lot of ammunition and comparing Goldens career to a dirty jockstrap had me rolling on the floor. As if porter, Stu and Wold weren't enough you give us a promo like this one and melt our faces off. This may be Princetons night, can't wait to see what happens.

And there you have it. I have no reviewed EVERYONES promos. You can thank me with money or candy. Cheers!

[Wolf]

http://www.pwsforums.com/threads/182...81#post1879081

vote or die, dammit

[DramaShark]

Are we voting on who Wolfs ally will be? Or did I misread that?

[Wolf]

nah, just who you think it is