Trial By Fire Promo Discussion Thread

[The Full Time Shakey]

promo posted under hide tags (i hope), will remove them tomorrow - had them oked by a mod.

[Wolf]

First. The tag team match is the match of the night so many great promos. I don't remmember such a great match for tag team titles. I happy to take part in it


Devin Golden: What a great story telling scenary. The most creative promo from this years TBF. Such a great metaphor of crossing the line and poking sleeping dog with a stick. You sir are the best in FWA at what you do.

Mask and Tragedy: Ok the promo is gret, but... Y u no tell who you are? Cryonix showing up here can mean that it is him. The dialogue looks like it was written by him. There is one more option and that is TMX as the background description is from readers point of view, but Cryonix is more likely with the fact that they are involved in storyline with Stu.

Ryan Rondo: You actually made my jaw drop. I didn't expected such a great promo from you. You got promo writting down to t. You had good scenary, setting, you put your team over, your opponents and you hyped the match. This is exactlly how promo should look like according to Wolf 101.... the second one topped the tag team one. I have to say

Ryan Rondo is the star of TBF

XXX: I could really imaginated watching the promo on TV and on Raw. That is a huge bonus, since I could not see alot of promos (including my second promo) took place in an actual wrestling show. I love the butch character. Having different set of eyes in a promo is always good and I really miss manager figures in FWA.

Killemal: I really do want to face this guy. I am a fan of the gimmick and style of Eyesane and Killemal. There were so so parts at the beginning, but then you really brought it. The paragraph they were telling together was good, but you could have just give it to one of them since it is immpossible for them to say at the same time.

Juan Lopez- the match with Ryan Rondo: This can relate to, what I said about XXX promo as it was believable to be seen on TV, which is a plus. However, you tried toooo much to get heat, you need to tone it down as it would be channel changing.

Joey Ortiz: You were probably tired after two promos. Until it came down to the interview I got lost twice with the beach, ice cream bars. The Cuban Connection and Joey Ortiz havea lot of potential t just needs time. You didn't had to write it that long it could have been better

Chris Kennedy: You have plus from me for FWA museum, It is a little bit nostalgic. I can't remmember last time I heard(read) the names Ryan Hall, Tony Juvenille, Jillian De Silva. And btw

'The Idol' Matt Boudreau - 9/28/08". Kennedy places his hand on the championship and closes his eyes for a moment, remembering where he was at the moment and time on September 28th, 2008. Kennedy was just a snot nosed indie kid in Ring Of Honor

I will remmeber this

Unlike your Joey Ortiz promo this didn't felt that long. at first seeing it I was You hyped the match very well. You made your rivalry with Drazin sound so great troughout the promo like if you were feuding since the dawn of FWA and at Trial by Fire comes the boiling point. You also made me laugh with Drazin in 20 seconds and your description of Drazin

[The Full Time Shakey]

Thanks alot, Wolf. That means a lot coming from you, greatly appreciated. Will review your other promo soon, too tired right now, same for you Eyesnsane, will have your promos reviewed when I can.

Had fun writing my two promos for this show, starting to mesh it all in now, hope to aspire to greater things in future, let me say this though, this PPV is already looking like one of the best of 2012, the standard and quality has been absolutely absurd (in a good way) and everyone definitely brought their A-Game.

Also, Cryonix, if you're around, i'd like your thoughts on my promos, too.