Promo discussion thread fight night 1/28/12

[The Golden One]

Discuss promos here.

[DramaShark]

Drazin, I enjoyed the rhyme format, great stuff as always. I reall did feel like I was in a weird Dr. Suess book. LOL. Short but sweet, I think that's the awesome thing about your character is that he effectively says what he needs say in short paragraphs instead of dragging on as I am guilty of lol

Mac, Nice promo dude. You are putting more time into your promos which is good. The cheating girl friend angle made Mac feel more authentic as a war vet. I liked the part about Mac draggin his buddy into the desert but I don't think the death scene needed to be implied, that part was just a little over the top but all and all a solid promo from a promising up and comer

Eyensane, man Eyensane has snapped. That promo was great man, really portrayed Eyensane in a new light. It's fun seeing Eyensane lose his marbles and become more agressive. He is starting to remind me of Wolf. That promo had a very Wolf-like feel to it. That's a good thing You really made APAB your bitch here, this is one of my favorite promos this week.

Dan Ward - A solid promo here. My favorite line was "Typical women am I right?", which had me chuckle. Also liked how you went after Kennedy. I thought bringing up the rumors about Gabrielle joining Kennedy was a bit premature. Like most people I haven't heard of this lol

Ayla- Hot damn the Womens division just got interesting. Can not wait to see where Ayla goes, but an eventual Ayla/Alana match has to happen. This promo was great, very solid, she is a convincing heel and I loved it when she trashed both Jennifer Sky AND Nolee, my favorite line being: "At first I was told that it was someone named Jennifer Sky who I immediately thought was either a porn star or stripper. Now I get some red neck prostitute? Wow, that’s just disrespectful."
Wowza!

Juan Lopez - Short, but sweet. Classic heel promo, equipped with the heros music playing and a clown coming out. Wished it was longer though but for what it was, it was good stuff

MCFomage- At first, I LOL'd. Then I Serious'd. Then I LOL'd all over again. This got a laugh out of me, I didn't know you had it in you to be so funny Swinnster
His whole persona seems authentic, and I loved his dialog. "This MC got good taste though and I won't let just anyone taste my cheese, but you, you look like just my kinda flavour."
"Um... no thanks. Keep your cheese to yourself please."
Simply hilarious.

[Killswitch]

Duke Drazin: Good promo. Like I said I have always like Duke. Also I have always liked the way you give his entrouage or whatever you want to call them some time. Good job like I said, and also loved how well you lit into Alexx.

Mac: Damn. A very emotional promo and I liked that. The one thing though like JD said,the death scene shouldn't have been there. For some reason I didn't like it because it just seemed way to over the top. But it was still good, and I think Mac is going to be good if you keep doing this with him.

Eyesnsane: Good promo from you. It seems like it will be a good match between APAB and OTE if it ever happens . But it was good and you lit into Dan pretty well. I thought that it was good and you can keep on doing this you'll be pretty good but again you already are pretty good.

Ayla: Loved this promo. I'm glad that you are back. You are one of the better womens wrestlers that we have had in the FWA that hasn't one the title. With promos like this though the title will be yours soon.

Chris Kennedy: The Veyron's quad-turbocharged W16 engine sounding like a Dragons battlecry One of the best lines I have read in a promo long time. Awesome. After that it was a pretty good promo you nailed Thomas Princeton pretty damn well and also kept the feud with Wolf and the Siege going. One thing though, I thought that it went on a little too long in parts. But still a good promo and showing why you are the FWA Champion.

Joey Ortiz: Loved the sins at the first part of the promo. It did have me laughing which is good. Also nailed Cross and Alexx pretty well which I like. The ending was good as well. Good promo.

Juan Lopez: Short promo but that is alright. Would have loved to seen what Tripper brought to the table. .

MC Fromage: GREAT debut promo. Loved it, and cannot wait to see more from you.

[The Mac]

damn death scene lol

[Swinny]

I didn't know you had it in you to be so funny Swinnster

I don't know whether I should take that as a compliment or an insult.

But I appreciate the comments guys.

[Stratusphere]

Sorry I couldn't promo I had a real bad case of the flu yesterday and I was trying hard to get over it

[Eyesnsane]

Joey Ortiz: I have not laughed that hard in a while bro, nearly brought tears to my eyes, very good work with this guy, I am liking this character.

Mac: I liked the approach you took this week, the way you made it personal was a nice touch I thought. I thought it was very solid work, I can't wait to see how his story evolves. I am already seeing a bit of evolution of this guy. Keep it coming

Dan Ward: A solid promo from you here, I'm looking foreward to beefing with you for those tag titles. Should be some good stuff happnin

[Mr.E]

Really really sorry guys, my damned roommates didnt give me money to pay the bills on time and I lost my internets. I'll make it up