XXX: Golden's promo was top notch and so was this one, at least as far as the speaking parts go. You summed everything up nicely, XXX's feeling towards Golden, their history and everything this match means and the stretchers were a nice touch. The only thing is Golden is SO good at the descriptions and you didn't do much of that, but everyone has their different style and it'd be hard to beat Golden at his own game, so maybe that was a best way to go anyway.
Sarah Wolf: Wolf, I said Golden might be the best at descriptions and I think you might be the best at opening and introducing your promos. Both this and the Wolf one started off really great and really brought you into the scene and I've always thought that was a huge and very important part of this game. The speaking parts were great, really liked how you had Wolf talk about Dinorah because Sarah couldn't "sully herself by mentioning her name". I was a bit worried about that at first that you'd have Wolf talk for her the entire time, but you didn't and just doing that bit was great, including refering to Dinorah as "it". And then once you did start talking as Sarah it was more of the same and great stuff. One thing though, I don't know how long you've been doing the blue text for this character and if no one else has a problem with it, it's all good, but I found it very hard on the eyes and feel like it may deter some people from reading some of your promos.
Thomas Driver: You have not one, but two great characters here. The back-and-forth between Thomas and Mario is great stuff, I've seen people fail miserably at this sort of thing, but you do it very well. I think you should have mentioned your opponent more though, even though he didn't mention Driver much either and you did have the solid "Mike Failure" line. Other than that though, some good stuff, good back-and-forth, like I said, and some good lines in there too.
Over the Edge: Good stuff, great job alternating between each character and great job talking about your opponents and your history with them, really solid tag team promo overall.