Promo Discussion Thread 6/15/12

[Killswitch]

Discuss Promos Here.

[Selena Lover]

Okay feedback for those who's posted there promo so far

Drew: Wow great promo i love the fact you verbally rip your opponent to shreds erm constructive criticism oh erm compared to the rest of your promo your ending wasn't particularly strong but like I said I really liked it. It was bad ass

Altyrell/Lord Vincent: its so pretty!!!!!!! sorry but it is I really love the dossier thing you did Oh and the fact you hired an assassin on someone because they spill your drink erm constructive criticism erm...oh well not sure if it counts but I was having so much fun reading it I maybe wish that there was even more of it does that count??? I really liked it anyway

Erm if I've said something that upsets you in my feedback I'm sorry just my opinion

[The Mac]

sonny: was shocked very different then what im used to from u this was so bright and happy compared to the dark nathan king but i loved it good introductory work on the character and a decent amount of rippin of scott, clear, concise and straight forward not muddled so good debut brandido better bring it

[Selena Lover]

sonny: was shocked very different then what im used to from u this was so bright and happy compared to the dark nathan king but i loved it good introductory work on the character and a decent amount of rippin of scott, clear, concise and straight forward not muddled so good debut brandido better bring it

Yay!!!! thanks mac yeah cause nathan king was a exaggeration of my darker side and sonny is my happy side Oh and I'm sure he will he always gave me a hard challenge in the past

[carter007]

i need an extension pleaseeee

[EeL]

I am requesting an official extension, I have classes Saturday and Sunday so I may or may not be able to complete it by the deadline. I normally wouldn't do this but with the amount of people asking I guess it wouldn't hurt the show.

[jabberwocky]

I'm going to grab and extension also, thanks

[iMatt]

I got called into work all this weekend, I'll need an extension just to be safe. Working 10-12 hour days.

[DeadlyDozen]

Once my promos are up to te standard expected, i wont give any critique guys for the simple reason that so far i have made lot of errors and mistakes and therefore im going at this promoing style te wrong way, so if im not doing it properly then i cabt judge others effecyively

P.S. I dont know what others may think but i feel my latest TOAK promo is hitting the nail on the thread

[Wolfgang]

Sm should be DQ as promos must be atleast 10 lines long. I win because of technicality

[The Altyrell]

Sm should be DQ as promos must be atleast 10 lines long. I win because of technicality

Where is that stated?

[Wolfgang]

Where is that stated?

general e-fed fact

[Embrace The Evermore]

Thats just for intro promos in the character sign up Wolf, so you're going to have to take your loss to SM like a man

[Smartmark]

Sm should be DQ as promos must be atleast 10 lines long. I win because of technicality

Sorry that I let you down this week man

[Wolfgang]

Selena Lover: great first promo. I like the character and promo. She is so happy, sweet and cute. it puts a smile on my face As you jumped from topics of animal eating and gay marriage you completelly created an image of AJ Lee in front of me Crazy, sweet chick with toys > your fav character


Lord Blackbird Vinnie: Your character starts to really remind me this character-

http://www.millionaireplayboy.com/mp..._commander.jpg

I don't know if you are familiar with him, but you could make Vincent and his empire more like him more like him with more of a comical touch. I like the way to try to build a feud with Drew Stevenson and the grudge you created with this other guy out of nowhere. You shouldn't really call a side character Gabrielle in FWA. It is confusing.


Keegan- I don't think that you took right direction when you joined OTE with Keegan. I wanted to see the guy on his own kicking ass. But you played your cards like a experienced vet that you are in the promo. There was no flaw in it, but the intro/beginning was weak. overall it was a very good promo